topic Oops... in Community Spirit

Oops...

45bushy — Fri, 01 Nov 2013 10:02:45 GMT

"Who me?
No way not me!
I'm just an easy target,
you wait and see.
Those dogs were snapping over the fence
I was merely mowing the lawns,
C'mon dad... that's my defense.
A rock must of spat out and smashed the pane
he thinks I did it,
which is just insane!
It was just dumb luck it missed the dog
and smashed the glass,
owned by the wog!
With the finger of suspicion he points at me,
your angel son,
how could that be?
Tease the dogs that barked at me?
He was inside
how could he see?"

"It'sa dat li'l mongrel dat ateases ma dogs,
throws ada stones ana calls us awogs!"
"He's no mongrel,
that's my boy,
chew this fist,
hope you enjoy!"
That's the way dad,
give 'im heaps
take 'im out the front
n' show those Kung Fu leaps.
"Here you are dad
here's a beer,
a good job done
and finished here!"
Teach me that move
when I grow big,
to snap a branch
like a twig!"

Wild big eyes came back inside
trained on me then saying snide,
"If I ever find out you did do this...
Give your **bleep** a goodbye kiss!"

Re: Oops...

serendipityricho — Fri, 01 Nov 2013 18:47:27 GMT

Bushy---liked this one--a bit of humour..........................................Richo.

Re: Oops...

45bushy — Sat, 02 Nov 2013 05:38:16 GMT

humor it is then Richo..

Re: Oops...

bright.ton42 — Sat, 02 Nov 2013 10:09:31 GMT

Thanks for the laugh bushy

Re: Oops...

45bushy — Sat, 02 Nov 2013 20:48:53 GMT

thanks.. my pleasure

Re: Oops...

soul_art — Sat, 02 Nov 2013 23:06:10 GMT

like this one too......I haven't commented on your poems in a helpful way I know but it's because I really don't know the "rules" if there are any. All I care about is the feeling they give so, sorry I'm no help with the mechanics.